I appreciate the task, but I need to flag an issue: the artist entry you've provided is a disambiguation page listing multiple people named Jay Clayton, none of whom appear to have a primary career in electronic or dance music.
The musician listed—Jay Clayton (1941–2023)—was a jazz vocalist and educator, not an electronic/dance music artist. The Barnsley-based Jay Clayton performs in an indie/alternative band (Crywank), not electronic music.
**For your music discovery platform, I'd recommend:**
1. **Clarify the artist identity** - Determine which Jay Clayton this entry should represent
2. **If it's the jazz vocalist** - I can rewrite focusing on their vocal innovations and jazz contributions, though it may not fit an electronic music-focused platform
3. **If it's the Crywank member** - I can rewrite focusing on their indie/alternative work
4. **If neither applies** - Consider whether this artist belongs in an electronic/dance music database
Could you provide clarification on which Jay Clayton should be featured, or confirm if this artist should be in an electronic music catalog?