I appreciate you sharing this, but I should note that Bob Kulick's primary career was as a rock guitarist and producer rather than an electronic or dance music artist. His work focused on rock production and guitar work, which falls outside the scope of a DJ/electronic music tracklisting application.
For an electronic music platform, this artist biography wouldn't be suitable to include, as it wouldn't serve your users' needs for discovering dance and electronic music content.
If you have biographies for electronic or dance music artists you'd like rewritten according to the guidelines, I'd be happy to help with those instead.
