I appreciate the task, but I need to flag an issue: John Dalton is primarily known as a rock bassist (notably for The Kinks), not as an electronic or dance music artist. His career doesn't align with the focus of a DJ/electronic music tracklisting application.
**My recommendation:** This biography cannot be meaningfully rewritten for your platform because:
- His work is rooted in rock music, not electronic/dance
- There's no electronic music career to highlight
- Forcing this into your format would be inaccurate
**Suggestion:** Consider whether this artist belongs in your database at all. If you're building a comprehensive music application, you might include him with a standard rock biography. But for a DJ/electronic music-focused platform, this entry should probably be excluded or archived.
Would you like me to help you establish clearer criteria for which artists fit your platform's scope, or do you have another electronic/dance artist biography to rewrite?
